My favorite vacation was when I was 17 years old and my father took me to visit Cairo, Egypt. When we got there, we located the interconterial hotel near from the Pharaonic Village. After that, we went to the pyramids and we saw the Pharaoh Taxidermist on his great coffin and pictures on the walls and old antiques. And we spent major our time outside of the hotel. Sometimes we stay with father’s friends whole day and also we had lunch and dinner in the restaurants. We spent three days in Egypt and then we returned home with much joy and happiness.
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ReplyDeleteYou have only one error in verb tenses--stay instead of stayed. However, you only have 102 words, and you should have 150.
By the way, this is a nice photo!
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